Very nice but the character-in-the-back's hand size doesn't make sense in terms of perspective. The foreshortening effect would make it look a lot smaller since it is at the same plane as the girl's head, so it's size should be the size of a hand when compared to her head. It's a bit hard to explain but that hand's size is wrong. Anyways, I love the feel and mood of this image.
Ha! Thank you, but the scars are still there. I spoke to one guy at length about how the mascots were based off of the Blues Brothers and he just kept saying, "How do you know that? I don't think that's the case." Actually... That's pretty much how all the conversations went. I wouldn't have been quite as flustered if people didn't approach me right out with the, "that's not anime so get out" talk.